by Molly_Hart
Yes, please continue the story. I loved it. It would be a shame to have it end on that note.
Pleaseeee continue. How sweet and i think the sex will be Awesome!
And please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
Hell yes you have to write more....drag her ass back to the Palace!
Yes please i beg you continue is so so moving :'( it reminds me that biggest love of my life, just continue your story pleasee
Please continue this story!! It was so great and caught my attention and then ended and..just... You must continue.
This story just begs for the Princess to get her happy ending....maybe she could convince the King to recall her Protector...kicking and screaming if need be so the Princess can woo her?
You must continue this tale of love between two that are ment to be together..
You MUST continue this story. The characters were engaging and I found myself deeply entranced by the story and how it unfolded.
Please write many more chapters to their story....and soon.
I hadn't noticed how recent this was submitted... thought there would be more after this! I'm hooked; please continue!
Thank you for your story. I really hope you have more ready to post. :)
It was the most beautiful story ever, please write more about them! dont late! we are waiting, God bless you for all the feelings and memories you gave me :) just continue
Continue!! An amazing love story, let's see if love will conquer all
Love this story...please write more I'd love to know how it turns out :)
Please keep going. It's such a great stories so far and can't wait to see where you take this. :-) ;-)
Who are these people - Where is this perfect place - a King that says yes to his daughter wishes to be with a woman not a Prince he chose for her and she in turn wants to make her friend and protector, her Queen - I would love to go to this place but instead, I will wait for the next installment of the story
Nice idea, a splendid variation on a fairy tale type of story.
BUT... Please get it edited by someone who knows the English language - for example 'too' and 'to' mean different things and cannot just be thrown in as interchangeable. Similarly 'where' and 'were' are not the same word.
I don't know if there is a part 2 in your library yet, but I could guess how the story goes: very traditional. For something completely left field why not try and be different and fox those of us who assume that any sequel will be so damned predictable?
Personally I love a story where every next scene is not transmitted pages in advance, where something utterly unpredictable happens. A might well lead to Z, but it doesn't necessarily have to go via B, C, D, etc but could go T, F, M, X, H, etc - in other words, don't follow that yellow brick road.