All Comments on 'A Second Life Ch. 04'

Chapter 4 continues the glorious romantic saga by the author. Sweet, tender, loving, passionate, with compelling characters and an excellent plot, A Second Life is a story to be savored. This chapter, however, is not a stand alone read. The chapters which precede this one need to be read in order for it to be properly appreciated and fully understood. A five star rating for this submission seems quite inadequate.

Thanks for the vote of confidence. Chapter 5 is in the pipeline. I have been very busy dealing with some family issues that have prevented me from putting time to it. Rest assured that there's more to come.

Please finish this great story. I hate starting a great story and then get left with no ending.

I liked the addition of the dog, although a dog that guards at a public place might lead to problems. The story of them meeting online seems a bit contrived, but it all makes for a nice fantasy. Come up with something better than wet opening, and the obsession with the number of shots. In general it seemed too tidy,, what days they had sex/how many shots per day, etc. I was pleased, however, that you did not dwell on size.

I also am glad that you are continuing this great story.

I was hoping that you had not given up on this great story. Hope you continue.