All Comments on 'A Secret Ch. 01'

Staight into the action with this story, but without a bit of info about setting and characters it was difficult to imagine the first scene. I'd move the well described first blowjob along to the section after they play their dare game. Also get rid of 'I stared at it and I thought: I must be gay.' gays, like hetro's, fantasize about sex / other men, before they have their first real experience, so he should not be surprised he is gay.

Some good description, but not enough character development and plot to make this a great read.

I loved this story, it brings a whole new dimension to Golf!

Nice tale.

Still waiting for my first bi experience - this type of story just makes me more eager to try.

It made me think of when me and my friend took turns putting

each other's cocks in our mouths, daring each other to suck

for longer and longer periods of time. I'd like to read chapter two.

Just what I'm looking for when I'm a little horny. Had my cock in my hand after the first paragraph! I just wish it was someone else's instead of mine. Fairly short and got right to the point. Just what I needed.

I love this story, and I'm hoping for a second chapter.

Such a good story, like Jeff and myself when I gave him the pleasure he needed and he the cream

I needed. Forever his cocksucker

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