All Comments on 'A Secret Life Ch. 03'

Man, does this story hit the mark! Red hot, juicy and joyous sex -- in the context of a supremely romantic meeting of souls as well as bodies! I love it, but how can a young woman author understand so much so beautifully? More -- more -- more!

I am particularly taken with this phrase: "we busied round the kitchen." Is it common in British English to verb "busy?" Whether or not it *is* common, I like it. (I guess we get it in American English every now and then, but nothing so pure.)

Having his future bottom top him as their first sex together was such a clever move of Dave - and I like the tender lovemaking even more because I now know what is in store for Steve in the next chapters :-)