by ava23
loved the lead in and the tale ... great story, can't wait for the next installment!
You can take something for that... (plus, play with yourself while reading - duh!) - seriously, why bother with such a lame comment in the face of a nice story?
Loved it but would have loved it more if written from the viewpoint of the husband. Just saying.
but never mind. The greatest thrill a married couple can have is another man in bed with them. Her nervousness at the start was realistic and believable. She lost that soon enough and did what she was ready to do. More more!
Thanks for the feedback. I've already got part two done and pending. So check back soon, and let me know what you think!
A very believable storyline and an erotic story.
I'll be watching for the next chapter.
Thanks for the read.
justin is my kind of man and husband, and I do same as him with my wife , we all love this and we have several men I share my wife with.AAB2