All Comments on 'A Shared Wife Ch. 01'

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VagabondxVagabondxalmost 11 years ago
so far, so good!

loved the lead in and the tale ... great story, can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I am reading this very carefully

I fail to experience arousal

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
fail to?

You can take something for that... (plus, play with yourself while reading - duh!) - seriously, why bother with such a lame comment in the face of a nice story?

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattlealmost 11 years ago
Super

Loved it but would have loved it more if written from the viewpoint of the husband. Just saying.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Not the best writing

but never mind. The greatest thrill a married couple can have is another man in bed with them. Her nervousness at the start was realistic and believable. She lost that soon enough and did what she was ready to do. More more!

ava23ava23almost 11 years agoAuthor
feedback

Thanks for the feedback. I've already got part two done and pending. So check back soon, and let me know what you think!

thebuffalothebuffaloalmost 11 years ago

Good read. Looking forward to the next.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
Nicely done

A very believable storyline and an erotic story.

I'll be watching for the next chapter.

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
sharing

justin is my kind of man and husband, and I do same as him with my wife , we all love this and we have several men I share my wife with.AAB2

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