All Comments on 'A Simple Love Ch. 03'

I read all three Chapters to this story, and I have to admit it was moving. This is the first story that has moved me, made me feel sad for Leona and then joy for her. You are a very gifted writer, and I will be reading the rest of your stories, but I think I will remember this one for a long time.

is it possible for you to make another chapter? i just love this story. it is both heartbreaking and breathtaking.

thank you-scotchbound.

i say its a master piece , simply just touches the soul

i think it would bring tears to those who fall in love

well i really enjoyed your story its got everything its very touching story.If at all a disabled person reads this story there will be a ray of hope that there will be someone like "dave" who will take care & will give them lots of love.Hope you keep writing more sweet stories .

I loved this story to be moved from happiness to sadness and back in such a short story was great. You are a gifted and talented writer and I hope to see more from you.

You are such a talented writer. Thank you.

That serieswas nice I wanted to punch Dave for what he did but good ending

it felt like you just wanted to be done and finished with it and so it had no real development or build up or anything about Ken and Mandy....spoilt what was otherwise a good story.....

Nuf said

The love ? He says she's special but HE LOVES fucking other women ! This isn't a love story , it's just erotica --------

this is just a sick fuck story. i see no love here...

I’ve reserved my comments until the last chapter. Overall, I felt like this story was in the wrong section. It should have been in the “Erotic Fiction” section, not “Romance”. The first chapter had really no romance at all, it was just a “stroke” piece. And the other two chapters weren’t much different. This story just falls Way short of romance, in my opinion.

What utter bullshit, this 14 year old writer thinks using words like pretty, pretty face, attractive breasts, loving hugs etc makes it ROMANTIC, not one bit if these 3 chapters had anything to do with ROMANCE, belonged in Erotic couplings at best. Worst dialogue I have ever seen!

What an outstanding story of true love between two people, very well written and told.............