All Comments on 'A Slave to the Servants Ch. 16'

This is by far the most well written emotionally. distressed chapter I have had the pleasure of reading,I do hope your efforts of getting this book pubilshed have payed off.

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UGH! Amazing that a 6 month old half-breed hybrid has already morphed into every guy's nighmare mother-in-law. For that matter, many men's living nightmare. How many jealous & spiteful, shreiking harridan daughters have I seen destroy their mother's relationships. I with Damien & the Brothers - I'd rather die on my feet than live kneeling to a woman.

I didn't cry when she was "resold" I didn't cry when she was in the village but oh my god I can't stop crying now! I've fallen in love with this story! The brothers are wonderful and I couldn't stand to see this story end. I agree with everyone else DW. Publish this! You're amazing!

I'm telling you that you should go a head and get this made as book! What start as a way to get my jolly of ,has turn into more! I had put off reading other book because I'm so hook on what happens next!

Even without any sex this is an awesome story. Please publish it. Pateria is such a well conceived world and as a reader it is wonderful to explore and learn this new world!

I'm here because of the plot. Amazing!

I find it amazing in the middle of seriousness I laugh lik whn she yelled maybe I'm a lesbian or when even said I didn't like vomiting.

i laughed out loud a few times this chapter and im just thankful my boyfriend didnt ask me what i was laughing at because at this point it'd be impossible to try and explain! BUT NEXT TIME ATTACH A SPOILER ALERT TO YOUR NOTE ON THE BOTTOM!!! in my heart i knew you wouldn't/ couldn't kill off Damian and his brothers BUT in my head there was a "oh shit maybe just maybe" factor thats now gone! :( but keep up the amazing work!!! I'm addicted to this story :)

Don't take away the sweet, sweet brothers!

I hope she doesn't get the men killed. She is such a freaky kid!

Most mother's nursing don't have periods

as theres about another 20 chapters I assume they didny die. but omg! I was having a moment till I read that you needed them.

stop trying to give me heart failure lol

You're making me cry again. Jeewis I'm totallyt cut off from the real world until I'm done with this story. I would totally spend money buying this in a book store. Ps Evan is so freaking hot..

I've read alot of books in my life, and this is one of the best ever - I can't wait to get off work so I can read some more, and have a hard time tearing myself away from the screen. You really have a wonderful imagination and writing style! I'm hooked...

hannah will be a much bigger part of your story i think...

absolutely first rate writing.

I was bawling by the end of this chapter. You are an amazing writer and should try getting published for real. It takes real talent to get so many emotions felt so deeply.

it's been awhile since i've read this story. excellent writing, holds my attention always, finessee and thoughtful.

You should carry this story on....

But it is amazing science fiction/ fantasy.

I don't find it very stimulating sexually but the story building, character development, and exciting foreshadowing... I can't put it down. I don't vote on things here. I don't leave comments. But holy hell you did an amazing job and I couldn't continue reading without letting you know you did a fantastic job. If you end up writing anything outside of literotica I'd be happy to read that too.

ok. I just gotta ask.

If The Brothers bonded with the unborn Hannah, rather than with Ciara, where is that bond now? Ciara doesn't have it? Is it so well hidden in Hannah that it does not affect her?

Anom it is obvious Hanna has blocked the Lync. I hope she takes over and straitens the old one out.

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