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I remembered how supermodels had looked on Earth. The jaunty swing of their hips as they looked out over the crowds. Their eyes were even done up so it drew attention to them. That was considered beautiful on Earth.
The men sifted through my memories of Earth as we ate. I thought of every female I'd ever seen, from the most beautiful to the most hideous. We laughed and marveled over all the different ways a human woman could look.
Damien compared Earth females to women here. Something about the women on this planet called to him. Their feral nature was both dangerous and attractive. He craved contact with them.
"Not in a way I'd want to keep in my home, though," Kein muttered.
Paterian women were exciting, but they weren't like me. You'd be horrified to see Nu-reeh sleeping on your bed at home. Evan remembered my last pregnancy and all the times they had found me curled in their colors, fast asleep. Something about that picture made them all feel warm and cozy.
"You love me," I whispered.
They did. My family loved me. Everyone at the table understood what that meant and we all felt the same way.
It wasn't like hearing someone say 'I love you'. I felt the depth of their commitment to me. It was like nothing I'd felt before.
My shining eyes met each of theirs across the table. I was overcome with the feelings they had for me. Inadvertently, I started to choke up and tear.
That snapped Evan out of it. "If you vomit, it isn't morning sickness and it doesn't mean we lose," he warned me.
Bane and Kein agreed with him. This did not count and it wasn't the same thing.
"I will not vomit," I laughed taking a big swig of the fizzy drink they'd had prepared; it was oddly settling.
I focused on my stomach and didn't feel nauseated at all. They concentrated on me for a moment before they got back to eating. It would still be dishonorable to have me vomit my meal all over the floor.
"Told you the root would work," Kein said emptying his plate a second time.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoOne thing that bothers me is the fact that the human genes seem to make them more against slavery, but slavery has been a huge part of human history and is still a problem today. I think it would be more realistic if other races were also more curious or against slavery as well. As always, 10/10 story telling and I love every chapter.
xyz123446almost 2 years agoIt requires knowing a lot about Fuji but:
“"That is a strange way to greet," Fuji finally said from behind me. "My men did not instruct me to greet Mistress Nu-reeh this way. They told me not to touch her at all, in fact."”
Fuji’s reaction to seeing a heartfelt reunion between mother and daughter is concern that she might be greeting her owner(‘s owner) incorrectly. For some reason while it’s funny it’s also sad because its the only way she can process things… for now at least.
So long as I’m talking about the scene I feel really bad for Rose. I’d have to dig and it’s nigh impossible in this format but Rose is what 5 foot even? Just off memory from the time at the keepers Hannah is maybe 6 foot and Ra is mostly fully grown so is like 7ft before the wings? Terrifying!
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoI’m trying to read slower as I wish this story would never end but it’s just to good. I love all the characters!
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI almost stopped reading the story altogether after they beat Ciara. I only continued to see if she was going to lay down like a doormat or fight back somehow. I was pleased by there agreement to talk things through in the future. I still wasn't sure if I would ever be able to feel the same about the men though until this chapter. So thank you for restoring that beautiful balance of strong but loving arrogant men.
Anonymousover 7 years agoI'm not even sure you read and/or get these comments. I've only recently found your story, but I see you wrote it years ago. This final page for 24-2 confuses me a little, regarding the brothers' feelings towards the native women. I've previously had this confusion, on-and-off, through a few other chapters.
I honestly cannot determine their true feelings. Many times they've expressed their overall dislike for the women & the couplings. But then there was the moment in the first pregnancy, when Ciara felt Damien "luxuriating" in the coupling. And now this chapter, with Damien craving contact with the native women. The back & forth is confusing me. (I feel we've been informed that they hate being sexually dominated by these women.) I thought they weren't attracted to these women or their sexual ways. I mean, isn't this why they like their slaves virtually hairless, why they like to be touched and enjoy kissing, etc. Maybe they like both? The agressive nature of the native women, partnered with the feminine gentleness & sexual seduction of the slaves?
Also, if you get this message, one thing that's started to get to me. You're fairly thorough, so I imagine you're getting there & I'm just being impatient, but.......Ciara is human. She loves these men. I understand this is an alien planet, but much has been made of their differences & how things are incongruous between the two races. Why has she never become jealous when her men have to go to the couplings? It's a human attribute and would come naturally to Ciara. Especially considering she's never had real, romantic love in her life. I'd think she'd want to protect that & keep it for herself. She's smart & knows that she can't, but I'd think at this point she'd at least have expressed her displeasure. The men understand their obligations, and are therefore not affected. But she would be. Thanks!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoI would wager that erotica is woman's porn. Obviously I can only speak for myself but I certainly am more mentally stimulated than visually. Therefore more into erotica that watching two people poorly act out a sex scene...just doesn't do it for me.
Of course there is poorly written erotica too lol. And I can always tell when a man has written a story as opposed to a woman. How they tell the stories differs. Just my two cents..
jott50over 9 years agoi am pleasantly surprised at the number of female readers to this series. i guess i never realized how many women read erotica.
Anonymousover 10 years agoReally glad they are seeing the lasting damage that their punishment had on her. They really care about her, but I'm glad to see they are realizing the depth of the effects and are learning from their mistake.
The controlling thing is creepy as hell, and I was really pissed when Bane wanted to "punish" her for keeping it from them... after they had ignored her and said she was crazy for weeks when she tried to tell them. How hypocritical! Fortunately they realized the error.
Anonymousover 10 years agoThanks again for another beautifully tender and witty chapter, I agree with all the other positive comments.
I really, really hope Christof is the daddy this time, I think it would be fitting.
