All Comments on 'A slut to her Master'

I particularly like the phrase "raping me" - a phrase virtually never used in describing consentual sexual activity, but it sets the perfect tone for the anal sex that ends the tale.

And all the while there was "a primal, visceral look in your eyes." Excellent submission story, I hope you write more soon xxx

This is one excellent story. And I mean excellent. And not just for a debut either. It is not without a couple of minor grammatical flaws, but God, some of the imagery and subtle descriptions of the intenseness that is the power exchange were tantalising. Powerfully hot sex scenes follow in mounting fervour. This is close to brilliant.

Further evidence that the BDSM category is coming of age.

SN

Those before me have said it all, i can only concur....wonderful story! Your grasp of the feelings and use of powerful descriptions is a welcome and refreshing change...i look forward to more intensly erotic and intelligently written stories from you. Thank You for sharing with us. Excellent, just simply excellent.

The I/you format is a bit difficult to read, but overall good work.

What a debut! Powerful, concentrated and totally erotic.

Great story, very telling of your personal desires.

Hot story and hotter picture! More, more, more!

Wonderful story, truly captured the feelings ones such as us have.

made my pussy wet.

This is so well written