All Comments on 'A Special Night At The Club'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Not bad for a loving wife story.

However you seriously need an editor and proofreader. This line " give you a quick peck on the check just", it makes me wonder where you have the check she pecked on?

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