All Comments on 'A Stolen Moment'

very, very nice. I don't usually like second person narrative, but this has been so well done. Congratulations. Lucky woman and lucky Daddy!

But I have two lovely daughters and would never ever be turned on sexually by them, the thought makes me ill. I am their father and would kill to keep them safe and happy, but thats just me.

Loved reading this story. It is a great story, although it could have been longer. Please keep on writing more stories like this one.

stop writing in third person!

I don't think the anonymous third person narrative worked as well as it could have. It didn't really convey the sense of closeness and passion that I think you intended. I had to reward your effort with a good score, because I believe you deserved it, but I do hope you will make other submissions which hopefully will not be in the third person. Thank you for your work.

Not my kind of writing style, but well written nonetheless.

I am sitting here after reading that soaking wet ! I wish I was her, being totally adored like that.

This is so beautifully written.