All Comments on 'A Strange Advert'

This story had everything except it had nothing.

It was a framework of a story with no filling. It glossed over the wife's gang bang. There should have been a full page on how she was taken in all her holes and how she felt about what was happening to her.

The husband fucked his daughter in a few sentences.

What about the other women that were watching other than his sister in law?

Did they just go home and talk to their husbands about how they enjoyed fucking the wife?

The story had no structure. Why did they admit to sending their husbands to seduce him? How come they were sissies but were now fucking his wife?

There might have even been a follow up story.

I'm afraid this was all in the writers mind but unfortunately he couldn't convey it to the readers on this site. 1☆.

What utter nonsense

That was very excessive.

Also, he should have been the first one to take all his wifes holes, just wrong to take that from the couple and pretend they were doing them a favor.