by hotbottom1
Great description of the man-on-man sex and the giving of the man pussy by the bottom and being taken by the manly top.
Does it really, really feel that great?
Been long time since chapter 4 - good thing.
The story sucks.
I love all four chapters. Would like to hear more about the two couples, how Michelle and Mark are passionate in front of you and Gerald. And how you and Gerald become more comfortable with your sexuality and more passionate in front of them.
By the way ... forget the haters. They are just losers.
Keep writing my friend.
Writing is poor. At the end of each chapter I find myself saying aloud: just stupid.