All Comments on 'A Submissive at Heart Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Very Hot!!!

Great description of the man-on-man sex and the giving of the man pussy by the bottom and being taken by the manly top.

Does it really, really feel that great?

thongpantythongpantyover 9 years ago

Loved all 4 stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
NOT submissive, just plain gay

Been long time since chapter 4 - good thing.

The story sucks.

denrondenronabout 9 years ago
Hot Story

I love all four chapters. Would like to hear more about the two couples, how Michelle and Mark are passionate in front of you and Gerald. And how you and Gerald become more comfortable with your sexuality and more passionate in front of them.

By the way ... forget the haters. They are just losers.

Keep writing my friend.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Just stupid

Writing is poor. At the end of each chapter I find myself saying aloud: just stupid.

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