All Comments on 'A Suspicion'

interesting twist. I thought this story was headed towards the cliche of the wife being picked up as a hooker by some other guy... so this was different.

still I am not sure how the wife can explain that she is the hooker showing up at his hotel room in the next 5 or 10 minutes....

You should have finished your story with her showing up at his room and what they did after! That would have been better than the ending you gave it.

Thanks for writing!

Like sexmate I too would be curious to know how the wife explained herself. But like your other story a good fun read. Thanks again for posting your stories.

This story is not finished without her showing up at his room playing the gift escort, and bringing out the explaination and emotions. Still nicely done to that point, but please use accepted dialogue quote marks.

Bravo! this plotline seems real. haven't we all had our suspicions? and, yeah, we sometimes act on them. it diminishes us, but, hey, we're human. this story picked up on that and ran with it to a realistic end: he wasn't cheating, or so it seems.

normally, this is the point where it gets sexy...

Taking this story any further in a different direction would make it a different story. The one you wrote is fine. This one was a little silly and fun, but a realistic premise.

A nice tale, Well-Writ.

A positive non-cheating spouse is usually boring, but you've made it of interest.

Being male, sorry, I was irritated unduly by the detail of the shopping and many costume changes, but that's just the male of the species.

And Yes, Leave the ending exactly as writ.

Cheers, and Thanks for the Tale.

Kilroy.

When she shows up wearing a wig, if her husband doesn't recognize her instantly he will not be rude and will allow her to come in but within a couple of minutes, he will recognize her and they will have fun playing the role.

Happy he wasn't a cheater and the wife was going to make it up to him for suspecting as such.

On the same day! Very different, not a cut 'n paste near duplicate! Both rightly averaging near 4* ... great work!

It wasn't really a story.

It was more like an introduction. If that.

To sum it all up and not miss a thing: " I thought hubby might be cheating so I put on a wig and glasses and watched him. All he did was work and when it was over, drank a whiskey"

That's it! 2 sentences and I did not leave out a single thing of relevance!

Did that sound like a story to you? Or even an introduction to a story?

Thanks

5*

Not cute, but kind of funny I suppose.

A wig? She thinks she's Mata Hari? Dumber than a stump

It was cute.