All Comments on 'A Sweet Gift From a Friend's Mom'

Not bad at all. It is obvious that English is not your native language and you did well. Work a little more on syntax for a smoother delivery.

In one sentance you are talking to her mother. A few sentences later you are looking at his mother. Your story is too fragmented and you need to edit it. Poorly written

A true sexy story i feel. I loved it all the way and throughout. I almost cum reading your sex story and your story made me to mastrubate at once and i cum so good.

I also have hot's for my friends mom, and after reading your story, i felt strong enough to demand sex from her.

Thanks man, keeping writting such sexy stories, we boys love sexy hot moms with big breasts.

How old is she? Is she still young enough for you to make a baby in her belly?

Need to learn the difference between writing "his" and "her" which made the story confusing but we still got the point of the story. Nice story to tell.

I know that was one of my dreams i hope will continue with more of the story of Ami.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

I also have many friend's moms which i have wanted to fuck haard for a long time but was not able to gather courage to ask them

Now i will definitely fuck them haard

Story has potential, but is unreadable. Either learn proper English, or find a good editor