All Comments on 'A Tale by Josie and Brian'

Sounds like it's time for mommy to lick her daughter clean and get some of that cock action.

You know what you are trying to convey, that is obvious. I might suggest that you use one of the volunteer editors on Literotica to help you flesh out your next story.

Keep writing!

I also urge an editor of which there are many.

Not bad for a first try and new member of Lit. Keep on, find an editor and go for the next chapter.

The Eagle ( " ")

see's promise!

2 talons up

A lot of potential. Siblings close in age can help each other out without going all the way. It can benefit both in several ways.

Uhm...how are they unrealistic? I have 16E's. Some people have small breasts, some have large. Get over it.

That's all I can say about this great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

i stopped at the ugly 36DDDs, if you are really this big get a reduction before they kill your back and knees.

Very hot

Will we find out if they get hooked on each other, on the intensity and the feelings?

Every time I read a story where the girl supposedly has gigantic breasts and the guy has a porn star length cock, I quickly get bored out of my skull. Shaving off all of the pubic hair is another trope that has been vastly overused.

Since this was such a short story, I struggled onwards and read the whole thing anyway. I have to admit that I'm curious about the mother's reaction since you have a cliffhanger ending. But the actual story itself is nothing to write home about. 2/5