All Comments on 'A Tale from Trail'

40,000 stories here, and this is the first hashing one I've read. Too old to hare, but would love to try and snare you. Please keep up the good work. One-Eye Blind.

paragraphs are too long, especially the first paragraph. Try to shorten the paragraphs (~5 lines only). And make a separate paragraph for the dialogue. Otherwise, it's a good read. Hope this helps.

Different, interesting and very sexual. Thank you! This is why I love your stories!

I'll co'hare anytime you want to hash with the "Wrong Way" Phoenix H3!!! Great story, I'll have to suggest the kilt run to our kennel!! Sphinxter Swallows

MH3 in MN would welcome catching you.... In all the time that I have been reading lit, this is the first hashing story I have come across...ON-ON

This is the kind of hash I wanted to go on...heehee!