All Comments on 'A Taste of Home Ch. 02'

I think i'm going to love this story as i like all of your stories. Cant wait for the next chapter

this is simply a beautiful story! i can't wait for the rest of it

Micah sure found a pleasant way to recoup from the (subliminal suggestion emitting?) sticker on the fridge door in Pen and Ryan's apartment. Does it only affect nightwalkers, or are Penn & Ryan also affected in some yet to be discovered way? I can't wait to find out!

You have a good story going. Unfortunately, it seems to be getting a little sloppy in the handling of the smaller things: details skipped over, passages or descriptions rushed, etc. I am especially confused about the central nightwalker/daywalker thing. Nightwalkers are vampires, of course, but unless I'm mistaken (which I may be), you haven't actually explained what exactly a daywalker is. All in all, this chapter feels a little rushed, like you wrote it just a hair too quickly, with just a little too little revising.

I like it but they need to talk. Simon needs to know who Micah is related too, mind you two and two make four even for me, with the look alike and finding him where he did!!