All Comments on 'A Teacher's Past Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
yea

fucking ace cant wait for next part

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Kind of boring

A lot of words which ulitmately did not amount to much . Considering the subject matter ,it could have been alot more exciting . But , it was like a beautiful girl who doesn't know how to fuck ... Boring ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
fantastic

Fantastic story, especially because my 34 year old wife is a teacher, and also extremely submissive to my perverted desires. I would love to read even more about her and what "Sky" eventually does with her.

sadcoresadcorealmost 16 years ago
great

its a great story superb two tumbs up

libertarianlibertarianover 15 years ago
When does does Sky subjacate her?

Where is sky?

BallsOfSteelBallsOfSteelalmost 15 years ago
A good effort

Compared with this series, your later work 'Susan's Story' is a tremendous improvement. Glad to see you've kept at it.

foogyfoogyover 13 years ago

Susan's story is definitely an improvement.

however i will still want kerri's story to move forward.

Gradually she will learn to be slutty. She is to be taken to a strip bar, made to perform as a stripper. Then converted to a whore, given to a group of prison-fellows as their fuck toy for money, taken to a dungeon and fucked senseless in front of an audience.

There will come a time when any student can walk in and fuck her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
great job

your ability to show helplesness but still be pushed by urges beyond her control is very well done love it very much

mercianknightmercianknightalmost 13 years ago
Fabulous

And certainly time for another instalment. Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More Wendy

Absolutely great! The details and descriptions put one right there with Kerrie. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
TAKE TO ANOTHER LEVEL

THIS IS BEST STORY SO, ESPECIALLY THE MT. TEVOLT.

PARTY PART WAS BELIEVABLE AND AWESOME, THE GREAT ONE

WAY HARV SUCKED HER OFF

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
beautiful

You have a very special understanding of the betrayal of the mind by the body. Few understand it. Out of the few who do understand it, most are ashamed or embarrassed over it. I think it might explain why so many rapes go unreported. You did a fine job of showing Kerri as a very sensious hot woman who was also very repressed. I'd like to see her come into an acceptance of her sexuality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
swollen belly

Swollen belly is next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Awesome story!

Agree with other comments that you have a good grasp of the body's betrayal and how she knows she should resist... But ultimately she gives in to her lust and need to cum. In the next episodes... It would be erotic to read about her getting double penetrated by a couple of hung studs, gets her first BBC and then shared with his other BBC buddies. She is made to go to a strip club and forced to dance for money... Including a back room VIP fuck for money. This would send her down a path to get noticed and blackmailed by a pimp who will then sell her body to several men a day and night. It makes it hard for her to balance her teaching job and whoring job and she finally gets caught and loses job. She gives into her new life as a fucktoy. Her new pimp makes her work as a street whore...and she only charges $20 for a fuck and has to fuck 10 guys a day to pay the pimp. Soon she discovers her body is addicted to sex and she needs to be fucked several times a day or else go crazy. She visits gloryholes and attends gangbangs of 20-50 guys at a time. Gets tattooed as cumslut on her back. It ends with a count of the total number of guys and girls she's fucked in the short 1 year since being blackmailed ~thousands!!! - or something like that! Lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
don't care for rape

page 3 and 4 were nothing more than kidnapping and rape. the erotic scenes were not up to previous chapters standards

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A Teachers Past

I read this story years ago and loved it, just read it again and I still love it, such an exciting, erotic story, you keep the reader on edge every sentence.

I wanted the story to continue but I realize it has to end sometime, I enjoyed it so much I wrote my own story with the same theme, but I am not a writer, I can never get descriptive images and such feelings of despair and lust that I get from your words.

I love stories where the heroine or victim, depending how you view the story, to me she is a heroine, I love how she sub-comes to her own desires while being manipulated and used.

The lesbian parts are fantastic especially Jim’s mom, Laura, in her tight leather pants, I really loved that scene, you can actually feel the anxiety and turmoil that Kerrie goes through and then she gives in, this s the most thrilling part for me in any story, finally falling to her own lust, fantastic.

Okay, I wish there would have been something about her footwear, I happen to love boots, pumps and foot worship, but yours is still one of the best stories out there, thank you for all you have done.

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