All Comments on 'A Temptation to Substitute'

The build-up at the party was intense and delicious. Although the ending made sense from a storytelling PoV, I'd really like to know what happened to these two, how they developed their relationship and how they balanced fun with marriage (of course, getting some details on the fun they had).

But I guess that's all left to the imagination. sigh.

Well it was a very intense story, granted. I know she wanted to be with Laura the few days and maybe more but we will never know unless you continue the story. I have mixed feelings about her going up to Laura's room but that will make the story if you continue it, wow, it really keeps your attention. Thanks

OH MY GOD! YOU ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO KEEP GOING!!

Oh how I loved this story... I do hope you continue!

fazza,

You truly get it. Unhurried, exciting build-up; strong character development and moral decisions to be made; and an ending that left me wanting more (but fulling understanding if you decide to leave it as it is).

Great job! Please submit more soon.

Wake me when something exciting happens.

No yawn here! The build up, the approach, the gentle increase in tension are perfection. Wonderful! Perhaps in five months they can give Rob lessons in the art of slow hands... etc.

Well done!

I will be very, very disappinted if you don't continue this in the near future. I love the romance that is growing between these two women and it should be carried to its conclusion. Thanks for your exciting words!

That was brilliantly done, and ended in exactly the right place while simultaneously being cruelly sadistic to readers on tenterhooks.

I, for one, would appreciate more.

- Petrov.

This is a beautifully written story. I would really love to find out what happens to these two as far as their relationship is concerned. Of course it's always fun for the reader to use their imagination to fill in the blanks... but I think a lot of us would like to see what happens to them coming straight from the creator's mind.

Very well written story and very erotic too the only drawback for me was that the first time her husband is away she cheats on him ok yes I do know about women knowing how to please other women better than men so yes she enjoys it but I cant help thinking that if the husband knows that his wife is getting better sex elsewhere he might be just a bit upset if you did write a next chapter try to get the wife to explain why she did it and how her new friend is better than him but dont let her surggest they have a threesome I know most readers would like that but in real life the husband would or should leave them to it.

This is your first and last warning, continue or it's off to the gallows with you.. but you WILL be pardoned if you write more episodes. This announcment has been authorised by your legion of readers, worldwide. lol

does Laura give Amelia the suite number ? Will we ever find out ? What will happen now, will we see a chapter two ? You leave a lot of questions un-answered, the build up was intense and erotic and we, the reader, have been left suspended. Please continue. Elizabeth Chu.

You should consider adding further chapters to this exciting story, so that we can share the blossoming relationship between Laura and Amelia that you have so beautifully described. You are a very talented author.

a bloody sadist to leave us, your readers, suspended in the suspence of not knowing if these two gals ever get together. You're a horrible, horrible old man. Finish us and them off !!!!!! Liz Chu.

Hi, I'm Regina ( Queeny ) and in my culture woman love is common. A long flexible tongue is so desired that it is a blessing from Shiva. Long nipples are also favoured as most woman have only short one. Your work is good to read, sexy.

You get me all worked up, leading me down the garden path, so to speak, then leaving me gasping for more, damn Colonial. You, fella, might take note of your cricketers and FINISH the job to an entertaining finale. If it was a game of cricket and they didn't finish off with a firm conclusion, which you haven't, there would be riots. We need to read a final ending to this tale. SCC.

Hey man you just have to give us the ending.

An excellent build up to an erotic encounter... but, but.. will we know what happened next, or is that it ????

why do you leave us hanging?it's a very great story with tremendous build up.But you cut our life short without an end.Finish the story in a next chapter or episode.In fact finish all your stories please!!!!!!!!

What happened next ? Will we ever know ? A well written tale but it needs another chapter to round it out, therefore, please consider continueing with the story.

Don't add another word. It is perfect. The greatest sex organ is the brain, and your story provides the perfect launching point for my imagination. Superb!

quite sometime has passed, it would be nice to know what transpired ( with some explicite descriptions ) between Amelia and Laura and if/how they were able to involve Rob in their relationship. Would he have been quite happy to have his beloved wife cared for in such a relationship? Might I be bold enough to suggest to you that there is another story waiting to be told? Many thanks for what you have written.

You cant stop this wonderful story here! You have to write the rest! Pleaseeeeeeeee! It was so good. I loved it. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

looking forward to more about these two and the trouble they get into

Interesting outcome. The lead up was long but necessary to emphasize the ending. Great story. It will become one of my favorites.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️