All Comments on 'A Time of Love'

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William smythWilliam smythover 11 years ago
What this family needs

is a couple more sons to completely fulfill the demands of the super hot duo of Jane and Olivia.

BarbaraBarbaraover 11 years ago
Deep Southern charm, well descibed by a novice writer, totally worth a 'Sisterhood' 5 star vote

Whether genuine or entirely fictitious, factually Southern family values reflect incest, with overt female exhibitionist behaviours, as folks mature into Adulthood in Alabama society thankfully! No uptight religious family in all 'Deep Southern' America, despite a 'Bible Belt' reputation, they all screw around madly like rattlesnakes in public!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good job

Very hot, loved every minute of it. Would love to read more about this family.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A good story

Very erotic and explicit.

It would be hot to read that Olivia was pregnant and perhaps Kent could talk Jane into letting him knock her up too.

A very nice incest story that needs another chapter to finalize the story.

Thanks for the read.

Nitehawk2BearNitehawk2Bearover 11 years ago

Wow, what a family. Very graphic and it didn't take long to get hard just reading what it would be like experiencing what was going on. Given those circumstances, what an interesting time it would be!

mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchabout 11 years ago

You wrote a well thought out story, but the open family thing just isn't for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Gay

It was entertaining up to the point that Olivia and Jane started getting "cozy". Then when Jackson started to grope Kent that killed it for me. I couldn't read any farther. I think this story belongs in another catagory. This section should remain brother and sister exclusively.

MrBill36MrBill36almost 9 years ago
A Tangled Mess

I guess I'm not the only one who has fantasized about what it would be like to fuck your whole family. The tryst begins. Then comes mom with a harness, Dad and son daughter on mom, son in daughters asks everybody getting blow jobs or eating pussy - Gawd I love it! If you can imagine it-do it!

prop69prop69almost 7 years ago
Beautiful family story.

Olivia may have the best Christmas gift

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