All Comments on 'A Touch of Gentleness'

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cpm09cpm09over 14 years ago
Sweet!

Ah..that was very nice and sexy too. but I wish there was more! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Oh My...

That was...amazing! Poignant and erotic at the same time - good job. May just be my mood but found myself wanting to cry at the end... Very good writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Basic grammar...

YOU'RE = YOU ARE / YOUR = BELONGS TO = YOUR CAR

TO = DIRECTION / TOO = AS WELL AS / TWO = THE SECONDS NUMBER

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