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All Comments on 'A Touch of Gentleness'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Basic grammar...

YOU'RE = YOU ARE / YOUR = BELONGS TO = YOUR CAR

TO = DIRECTION / TOO = AS WELL AS / TWO = THE SECONDS NUMBER

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Oh My...

That was...amazing! Poignant and erotic at the same time - good job. May just be my mood but found myself wanting to cry at the end... Very good writing

cpm09cpm09over 14 years ago
Sweet!

Ah..that was very nice and sexy too. but I wish there was more! :)

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