All Comments on 'A Train Encounter'

by tetheredbeauty

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SeracaeSeracaealmost 17 years ago
Ended Too Soon!

Fantastic writing, but it ended RIGHT in the middle of it all. No matter where the story was going to end up, it at least should have gone farther. Add the rest, though, and this would be a top-shelf story.

Dream CatcherDream Catcheralmost 17 years ago
Your such a "teaser"

Yes it was short and left me somewhat lost, but know doubt you two had a beautiful sexual experience that continued in his hotel that night. At least if I was the guy on the train thats what I would have wanted, so I am left to fantisize.

Thats not so bad!

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