by tetheredbeauty
Fantastic writing, but it ended RIGHT in the middle of it all. No matter where the story was going to end up, it at least should have gone farther. Add the rest, though, and this would be a top-shelf story.
Yes it was short and left me somewhat lost, but know doubt you two had a beautiful sexual experience that continued in his hotel that night. At least if I was the guy on the train thats what I would have wanted, so I am left to fantisize.
Thats not so bad!