All Comments on 'A Trip to the Islands Ch. 05'

Nice ending, wish she was real. Would have made a great 3-way.

Thank you you for a lovely story. A great ending. Having lived in the Caribbean on and off over many years your story has more credence than most can imagine

but I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Well written, thought out and presented to us as readers. Thank you and please keep writing.

V/R,

Jerry

Well written. Monica was a lovely twist. The sex was a little over the top, however this is LITEROTICA !

It was a great twisted ending

I started at chapter one it was great

You wrote a wonderful love story, warm, very sexy, fun storyline, touching... Please continue... I will read about the Forest Nymph next...

The series was going great until you made Susan a pathetic submissive.