All Comments on 'A Trout for Emma Wightman'

Your writing about doing things nice and easy is refreshing, to say the least. Not just a wham - bam, thank you maam that some people think is the only way to write a story. Looking to seeing more from you in the future. Keep up the good work.

Ghostwriter48

well written. I have read many 'first time' stories and they were all about how fing good the male was or how big he was or how happy he made her. this story kept my complete interest and the story line seemed so natural, so real. please keep writing

but breaking it into a couple of chapters would have been better, great otherwise. :)

Real heartwarming.

sequel! Heck with breaking it into smaller chapters - certainly managed to keep my attention! :) BUT, I want to find out happens next - does it get serious with Louisa or.... Another great job! Thanks

Fantastic effort! Hope you have plans for many more stories because you are very good at character deveopment quickly and I appreciate that.

Blake

Smashing debut. Well written and sure to have broad appeal. Genres in LIT are necessary, I suppose, but they do not do service to a story such as yours; although I'll admit that if one category had to be chosen "Mature" is the one. In any event I look forward to your further work. Best regards, Kal

I felt some kinship with the protagonist(we NEVER did find out his name!), since I also had the chance to have a 42 y. old mistress when I was 25. Did she ever teach me a thing or two!

Thanks for this very nicely done work.

Outstanding storyline that flowed quite nicely in an eloquent and enticing format that keeps the reader wanting more. The descriptive sex education theme throughout the beginning chapters also spiced up the story rather well.

FUCK THE AUTHOR!

The story was fairly easy to read in spite of minor goofs. It seemed like an actual story not just another amateur attempt at a porno script. I like the guy's appreciation of the female anatomy and his shunning of backdoor explorations. Keep that up and continue to explore the fertility angle if possible and you'll have a fan.

Five Stars, and thanks for a really enjoyable story.

I'm a thinking that you have just droped this young man in Valhalla. Great story!!!

Probably because the nameless stud in this story took care of all the willing women! Wow, I'd say he is about the luckiest stiff (pun intended) around. Lucky? Yes, definitely--getting it on with your female Sunday school teacher isn't something every guy can brag about.

Great story. I see there's another chapter, which I'm eager to read.

Five Stars!

You surely know haw to make your fellow man JEALOUS.

Just that it was a wonderful story. When life takes a turn, in a surprising way.

Enjoyable, shame we heard no more from Emma but a good story nevertheless.