All Comments on 'A Valentine's Day Surprise'

by lipsofanangel

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TE999TE999about 17 years ago
Fast paced and sexy

A fine example of erotic writing and an enjoyable read. Clever dialogue and vivid imagery. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
very hot adn erotic

all I can say is WOW! that story hit me as a female with the romance involved adn the high energy of it all. it was totally well written adn exciting to read. the characters were well formed adn the wording really let me visualize adn feel soem of the emotions from the characters. I really enjoyed it and woudl lvoe to read more from this author! I hope she wins the contest as it was one of the best stories I have read in a long time.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerabout 17 years ago
Well ...

That's definitely a Happy Valentine's Day. :) Great story.

RogueLurkerRogueLurkerabout 17 years ago
Well ...

That's definitely a Happy Valentine's Day. :) Great story.

deathlynxdeathlynxabout 17 years ago
Incredibly hot...

...and touchingly romantic! A powerful and enticing read!

NirvanadragonesNirvanadragonesabout 17 years ago
Good story

I enjoyed it! Good luck in the contest.

slyc_willieslyc_willieabout 17 years ago
Sexy and Sweet

Very nice, Lips. Good luck in the contest.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonabout 17 years ago
Nicely Written

Nicely written and erotic...good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
very hot

not into girls mostly but stories like this make one wonder ...

good luck!

Maharat

Selena_KittSelena_Kittabout 17 years ago
MMmmmm!

This was yummy! Hot and fun. Good luck :)

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