All Comments on 'A Very Unexpected First'

Great read continue the story .

Young love, they were made for each other, hope there is another chapter where they stay together get married and have some kids, it's hard enough on kids today but harder for those that don't fit in.

I really like this story and would love for it to be a big series.

Nice Story, but your writing stinks. Take lessons.

I thought it was very nice. I guess maybe I missed something if your writing stinks. I love that you seem to like Red Heads.

I really enjoyed the story. Like one other person suggested make it a series.

I liked your story but your 18 yr olds sounded more like 14 yr olds. But I liked your sfory. ..

Wonderful story with characters you root for and are happy to see them together and not off fucking everyone else. Good job

Very nice story and I wish there would have been a part 2. Thank you!!!

Good tale but too short & somehow lacking. The story seemed to skim over what was being told rather than getting the reader involved as a part of the story. 3

Bill S.