by S3lwyncd0g
Good tale but too short & somehow lacking. The story seemed to skim over what was being told rather than getting the reader involved as a part of the story. 3
Bill S.
Wonderful story with characters you root for and are happy to see them together and not off fucking everyone else. Good job
I liked your story but your 18 yr olds sounded more like 14 yr olds. But I liked your sfory. ..
I really enjoyed the story. Like one other person suggested make it a series.
I thought it was very nice. I guess maybe I missed something if your writing stinks. I love that you seem to like Red Heads.
Young love, they were made for each other, hope there is another chapter where they stay together get married and have some kids, it's hard enough on kids today but harder for those that don't fit in.