by TonyDowse
I really like Tony Dowse's longer stories, with their slower build-up and extended descriptions of lovemaking, and although not in the same league this is an excellent appetizer. As a train traveller myself I can see the attraction of catching a glimpse through a bedroom window, if not of a couple making love (I've never been that lucky), then of the ideal location for a night of passion. The rising anticipation of the traveller is well conveyed and the erotic content is as good as ever. Nice lingerie, too, and an intriguing hint of something below the surface in this area. Might there be more developments here, perhaps?
Dafydd