All Comments on 'A Virgin Again'

Slow and easy. Very sweet story. Good descriptions. And short enough to read quickly!

It was a cute little story but came up short in many ways besudes length. Who were these people... they didn't even have names. Why should I care about these people? There is a story here, and there were flashes that showed you could tell it, and wanted to, but didn't.

Let it out. Let yourself go. No one here knows, or cares who Moon Dragon is.

Technically, this is a very mature story for a Literotica debut. You have tried your hand at both a slightly unorthodox format and at realistic content, succeeding with both. Congratulations!

I look forward to your future submissions.

I really enjoyed this story. Your style of writing appeals to me personally. The lack of descriptor or names I didn't find a problem. I have a strong enough imagination to visualise just what you were describing. It was short, but in no way lacking in intensity or passion. The ending was intriguing, maybe a deliberate lead in to further 'adventures', maybe not. A very good read. I look forward to more. Thank you.

This really is a fabulous Debut. Keep writing. PLEASE

A delicate little flower of a story that packs surprising heat. The contrast between the gentle love-making and the intense emotion makes it tick very nicely.

A very stimulating story with nice psychological shading at the end.

This reads more like memory than like fiction! It's very appealing, not cliched, and makes me want to know more -- what the women said to one another when they woke up, and why this was a one-time thing. (Near the end of the story, you should change "lied down" to "lay down" though.) Do write more, please.