All Comments on 'A Visit to a Sex Club'

Wow, thats what you get up to in the UK. How I would love to join you! Very kinky sex!

Awesome sex...you lucky guy

This is a ~ 5.500-word story. 29 of them are direct speech.

Speaking to each other, that's what people do when they meet, when they interact, when they come together to make love, don't they?

Dialog is a pro for a story. Writing good dialog isn't easy, but you (almost) didn't even try.

She's almost mute throughout. As a woman, I would've like to have heard more of her enjoyment and, first hand, how her wishes and needs were met. But thank you for an interesting read about an interesting club.