All Comments on 'A Vow Unsaid Ch. 03'

by oxytoxin

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biercebiercealmost 11 years ago
Great story

Good characters. Nice look at the south and their ways. ( i am from the south, so I have a little insight) Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Top drawer!

oxytoxinoxytoxinalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Top drawer?

Sorry, what does "top drawer" mean? Haha :)

DannyRaeDannyRaealmost 11 years ago

So damn amazing, I can't even being to explain it. I think that because you set it in such a different time, it seemed more raw and carnal. You are a fantastic writer, and I can't imagine reading anything by anyone else! Write more, of anything!

oxytoxinoxytoxinalmost 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you, you're very kind. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

Wildcat2013Wildcat2013almost 11 years ago
Oh I hope there is more coming

I love these characters. It would be awesome if Patrick and Elizabeth could find happiness together.

Thank you for the great story!

OldmarriedtarOldmarriedtarover 10 years ago
Good story.

I had trouble understanding why Kaitlyn did not have sex with Patrick. For a student of math it would have been the logical thing to do circa 1860s. Being a student of math, being a hard core lesbian would have been irrelevant.. How did Elizabeth learn to communicate being born deaf and raised on a farm circa 1860 Did you mean pirate instead of private. I still found it worthy of 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
love this story!

I've greatly enjoyed reading this story! Love both Nora and Kaitlyn characters. I concur with an earlier reader comment that hopefully Patrick and Elizabeth could find happiness together, though i don't know how likely it would be in those time and place under such (marriage) circumstance. Around the end of second chapter, i was a bit afraid this might end in tragedy. I'm glad my fear was unfounded, and they've found happiness together.

Hope to read more about these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

It's such a lovely story and you wrote it quite well...

Thank you.

knowinghumansknowinghumansalmost 5 years ago
One of THE Best Ones Here

I really love the way you write. It's very romantic, reading about it. Do grace us with some of your works some time soon as well. As for this work of yours, thank you very much for sharing!

Nerdyqueen94Nerdyqueen94almost 3 years ago

This story was very good. There were some historic flaws I believe but frankly I don't care. The romance touched my heart and I wept for all the souls that lived in centuries past without having the love that truly called to them. Would love to read more just like it.

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