by cknthisout
waiting for part 2 !!!!!!
I found that having the couples act sexually charged from the beginning to be quite unrealistic. For me, it killed the story.
It would have been nice to have had the eroticism develop out of a plot-based scenario. Then it would have been more of an erotic story than a ho-hum "stroke story" like most of the subpar stories on this site.
what happened to the food? It was cooked and placed in the warmer while the fucking and sucking went on, but everyone just went to bed after the sex! Would love to have such a weekend some time myself. Enjoyed the story except for the continuity glitch. Still gave it 5 stars.
Thanks for your hot story!
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