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I just loved this story definitely one of my favorites.

They're delicious. But you need to get a good editor; for example: (1) You wrote DIVE, you meant DRIVE; (2) You wrote PEAK, you meant PEEK; (3) You keep writing BEAUTIES (plural), when you mean BEAUTY'S (possessive); You keep writing RING (as in ding-dong), when you meant WRING (to squeeze the liquid out of).