All Comments on 'A Western Whimsey'

I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this one. I stumbled upon one of Your new story posts, enjoyed it enough to check what else You had written. This was so unique. I was a little startled at the religious twist but You worked it so well. I guess that's what made it so interesting. Thank You for the pleasure.

I so want to be your little slave girl! The writing's excellent, and I think you portray the difference between slave by force and slave by choice well. Add in a little DaddyDom, and that's a GOOD mix!

A lovely little story. Yes, your colloquialisms were a touch strange, but no more off than I have read in published works. And I am an American westerner. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you.