All Comments on 'A Wet Day'

The pacing and rhythm of the prose is so languorously seductive and alluring, so maddeningly slow and yet so compellingly irresistible, ineluctable like the tide lapping at your toes that will finally, inevitably envelop and overwhelm you.

Outstanding.

Quite speechless really, and that is a good sign. The writer had me captured and I did not want the story to end. Highly erotic.

a very enjoyable read well written with a rhythmic feel to it - the erotic element was arousing but well contained - i look forward to further contributions

kind regards

The scene you created was vivid. Smooth, flowing, and very sensual. Thank you

This was really well written! The only thing I would change is the ending; it would have been nice if it was a little longer towards the end. Other than that, perfect.

This is all so amazing. I do wish there was more details about the cunni, though. Unclothed, I mean. 😍❤️