by shiresa
I enjoyed this story - different twist on the usual S/F story, keep up the good writing as I am looking forward to future chapters of a very interesting story.
Very nice writing, keep it up. I look forward to reading more of Owa and Anna.
Your story showed much more depth than I thought it would at the start. Please share more of your excellent writing style with us. Great Job!
I like the primiss of this story. It is an unusual story. It still is a love story, even if the elf has no say in the matter. Please keep the chapters coming.
Interesting story this is... Especially the part where Owa tells about having a goat being in love with him. *LOL* I'll look forward to the story..
G.A.
I would not have thought it when I started reading the story, but Owa is a good guy! And that must be some instrument... ahem... I just wanna know what happens next, why is he especially lucky, what how when - ack. Start writing again!
*crosses her arms in front of her chest and glares at you*
now!
...with some good story telling and goes on to an intriguing idea and a great gepiction of your orcs. Even better because you give loads of info with few words. At the end of this you immediatly got a fave for it because you deserve that.
I immensely enjoyed this story and look forward to part two.
Thanks... A lot.