All Comments on 'A Wife Submits'

well written if you like that kind of thing - but a cuck story just the same.

Gotta be written by a sicko who posts similar garbage under different names.

the woman in this story needs to die faster thans her AIDS will kill her

Joe needs to be castrated and sent to prison

And her husband needs crawl back under the carpet

Loved it.

I guess the lobotomy worked. WTF!!!!!! Really bad

I always advise Literotica authors to not allow comments because of the mean-spirited readers that seem to always have something ugly to say. Regardless, I thought the story was well constructed and well writen. Changing from first person to third person at the end was a little distracting.

No need to read this story. Cuck stories belong in the fetish section. No vote was given.

who said well done i wonder do you really think that way or are you just retarded.

Will is married to a filfthy trollop. Nice.

From the sounds of it the woman sounds like she has mental issues. Not to mention the grammar and the story line being hard to follow. I mean none of this makes sense guy tells her he has no interest in her yet passes her out like a treat to his friends then uses her to get off. Sorry but myself I would never let myself be used like a whore like that or lay with someone who would not let me cum

Any chance to have a part 2 ?

Thank you !

this woman have a lobotomy? Did her husband have an IQ of 20. Her reasoning ability clearly is non-functioning and we are lfet with a cheating story populated by stupid, stupid spouses and selfish characters who only care about themselves. Dumb plot, dumb charaters.

That is all this author wants. His name is not Isaac; it is Will. But just telling her story will not let him get even with her. Too bad, sooooo sad.

Joe the Bull is remarkably manipulative, almost certainly a sociopath. Sweety screwed up at the reunion. However, when Hubby Will informs her that she was outed by Bull, she should have recognized that Bull had attacked her marriage with a potentially terminal thrust. Her realistic options are few: total capitulation, complete communication with Hubby (best, IMHO) or carefully OFF the SOB Bull! I like the last option best, but think the communication one to be wisest (and the Off option should also include some HubbyComm.)

There are numerous grammar/structure problems, but the story is fairly clear ... I agree that she is portrayed as an indecisive victim!

Once a Whore ....... "well" you get the picture?? ............... I'll use my crayons for you Issac00 if it helps with you "Cartoon" story!!!!

One of the best stories I have read in a while.

Didn't want it to end so hope you write more.

Thanks Kev

no matter how badly you try to dehumanize them with your stories. whatever she did must have hurt alot but have faith there are many women out there and after awhile it won't hurt so much but they will keep trying

....women carrying around a whole wards worth of baggage.other wise it makes no sense, like this one.

Seriously... It's called fiction. If you don't like my story that's great, no problem. If you think it was poorly written or there's too many grammatical errors, or the characters are shallow or the plot is dull, fine I appreciate the feedback. But I'm a bit surprised that people attack the main character for acting slutty or Joe for being domineering. It's as if these people accidentally logged in to the wrong site. It's a sex story people. The characters, the plot, the wording, are designed to be sexy not realistic or a commentary on how I feel about women or sexual relationships. Someone actually said, "I wouldn't lie with a man who treated me like that." Well I seriously hope not. I wouldn't think most people would.

That said, bring it on. I'm not trying to restrict your comments just putting in my two cents.

you write what you are - time, effort and talent spent on crap that anyone can write.<p>

So Why Bother unless you want to rise up out of the fecal matter.

Please return to it as soon as possible and take the Anon who thinks this crap is "brilliant" with you.

I frankly don't have any idea what these 'annonymous' cretins who bash this story are talking about. If you don't care for the submissive wife genre that's OK, but I happen to love it. This was a well written story which contained a nice amount of anticipation, if you will, about what this wife would be compelled to do next. I can only hope that the author continues this story, and continues to write others. You have been added to my favorites so maybe I'll find it easier to read any new entries.

5*

Not even that.

Sorry, don't get off on cuck stories.

Cuck shit! One star.

You suck!

I liked how emotionally it was written. All the experiences of the main character were perfectly conveyed. Thank you for your creativity and work. And I will tell all haters of this theme and author - you are sick in the head, if you read topics that are disgusting to you, and then shit in the comments. You can't give birth to anything yourself, but you shit on others. F*** you all.

I cant believe a woman would be such a cheating whore. I cant believe her husband is a gay queer allowing her to be in his bed knowing she just came from getting slammed. There is no mistaking a woman's smell after she has been cummed in, its not a good smell . So Will must be brain dead or a stupid red neck.