All Comments on 'A Will That Didn't Need Breaking'

by ClaireBlossom

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Rainbow SkinRainbow Skinalmost 20 years ago
innocence broken

You really capture the innocence turned to discovery, the awkwardness of the first time and the pleasure of surrender.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
You Let Us Ride 'Shotgun'....

I feel as if I'm in your dream room, seeing what you write in a mental 3-d with surround sound, movement and sensations and smells as well.

From my 'male' point of view :-> ...good chemical clicking in your style...Exceptional.

Nuff said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
top girl

yes, yes, yes. a very believable accont of first time sex. brought it all back... including the hard on!

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