by ClaireBlossom
You really capture the innocence turned to discovery, the awkwardness of the first time and the pleasure of surrender.
I feel as if I'm in your dream room, seeing what you write in a mental 3-d with surround sound, movement and sensations and smells as well.
From my 'male' point of view :-> ...good chemical clicking in your style...Exceptional.
Nuff said.
yes, yes, yes. a very believable accont of first time sex. brought it all back... including the hard on!