by Bluepen451
I hope to see more chapters in soon it reminds me of Melvin and the witch on literotica. but a whole lot more sexier and hot
You have GOT to continue this tale with more chapters. Vivid imagination, and holds one's attention very well! VERY nice job!!!!
Waiting breathlessly for more chapters. I really like the way you write . . . also that the grammer and spelling are so good it makes it easy to read the stories. This is really a good story plot. Like it so much !!