by Bluepen451
Waiting breathlessly for more chapters. I really like the way you write . . . also that the grammer and spelling are so good it makes it easy to read the stories. This is really a good story plot. Like it so much !!
You have GOT to continue this tale with more chapters. Vivid imagination, and holds one's attention very well! VERY nice job!!!!
I hope to see more chapters in soon it reminds me of Melvin and the witch on literotica. but a whole lot more sexier and hot