All Comments on 'Abduction Ch. 02'

rape in order to get his little dickey wet. Written to encourage those with similar problems

You know, for many people incest stories seem sick. I don't think that incestrous relationship is something natural or acceptable but as a fantasy in a form of literature it can be stimulating. When you read incest stories are you encouraged to sleep with your father or mother? Because I don't feel like this, I couldn't imagine me sleeping with my father, although father-daughter stories are for me a big turn-on. People have many fetishes. You shoul'd understand this and accept it.

The same way is with rape fantasies. As long as they are fantasies they are not harmful. It's better to have those fantasies than to go out on a street and attack somebody.

PS. Sorry for any mistakes, English isn't my first language.

As far as the story is concerned, I'd like to see the characters falling in love and having babies :P

Keep up the good work and don't be discouraged by those who can't understand fiction.

WOW what a wonderful fanasty!

thanks!! Please say more chapters are coming!

harmful exchange of body fluids---Some are thinly disguised RAPE stories---Like any other rape story they glorify cruelty--Most often of the female--Since this is a site called Lit-EROTICA--I assume that those stories like those of a loving exchange of body fluids to be erotic to the author and to those who ENJOY them.

BDSM stories feature a lot of violence often without any significant feelings, why don't you start a campaign against any violent acts in literature?

Great story, please continue it! I wish I was her! ;)

As HE said, it`s a harsh beginning but I`m hoping to see some care and tenderness from him. Post ch. 3 soon!!!

Fantasy or not - seeking or distributing pain - or taking the time to write about it is a turn off to a semi-normal human.<P>

As a species, we don't find pleasure in pain either mental or physical unless the seeker and/or provider is sick in the head and heart.<P>

So writer, with your talent why would you chose to disrespect your characters and therefore yourself unless you need the pain - yourself. Your having spent a lot of time on this makes it an easy argument. Why is that - are you a submissive into pain and humiliation?<P>

A sad waste of talent for the few jaded and addicted to pain.

Wonderful update! I am still loving this! Please please please update soon!!!

I loved it, it's very moving, but clearly a non-realistic situation, really well-written also, amazing job!

...is a fantasy, and nothing more. That is why it is written. I think I speak for many, many readers on this site when I say that this is what my fantasy is, and I perceive myself as a normal human being. I just get off to being dominated. And these non-realistic situations naturally get me going... Nothing special.

I would really appreciated it if you continued this story. It's engrossing. I'm really excited to see how it unfolds.

There should be some kind of rule removing stories from here if they're not finished!

This is such a good story and I wish it were continued!!!

One of the best and hottest stories I've read!

Please continue writing :)

(And I've been here for over a decade so you can take my word as a true compliment :)

Please continue the story.

A helpless captive and a cruel, controlling captor always makes my day.