All Comments on 'Aboard the Lady May Ch. 01'

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BurntwistBurntwistalmost 15 years ago
More, More, More

Fantastic story! I can't believe the lack of comments on this story. Hope to read many more chapters soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Romance & erotic sex...so good

This story is fantastic!!! I love the characters of Felix and Jaime. They were meant to meet up - he being strong and protective in nature and she needing love and tenderness from years of abuse. Their first sexual encounter had my heart beating quickly since I was initially frightened for Jaime but it was beautifully developed into want and desire. I love your description and telling of the scene...it is so erotic.

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