All Comments on 'Aboard the Lady May Ch. 04'

I've never read anything quite like this on Literotica before. I'm intrigued. Can't wait to see how the plot develops!

Thank you for this chapter!! I can't wait to see what will happen next!!

I'm hooked on this story. These four characters are so interesting and real. The background story of each of them would be fascinating to read. Love the writing style - descriptive, emotional, smooth, expressive, specific, and memorable.

This is a real story. I agree with whoever said it's not quite like other erotica here. I really like your leads, they're both reacting to the circumstances like real people. It's so refreshing. Keep it up!

Hey,

I hope you haven't given up on this story. It's unique, a good read, and you've got so much ground left to cover!!

I hate finding a good yarn only to have it left unfinished. It's a great story, well written and thought out. I hope storyteller comes back and finishes this.