All Comments on 'Accessorizing Karin'

by johnnieblue44

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More

We need a part two. One of the best stories I've read in a LONG time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Loved it!

Can't wait for the second installment....nice to see you back johnnieblue44

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
I liked it a lot! 5*****

Thanks for writing. tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
So how is this eventually going to end

This affair is heading for a possible chunky husband . I can't see any good coming out of it

LickideesplitLickideesplitabout 11 years ago
Great seduction skills

Why bother developing great hook-up lines when the company cutie wants to inhale your tube steak? I would not have bothered dreaming something like this as a kid because I instinctively knew it would never come close - some things you DON'T want to accurately predict, but I was good on THAT one!

Hope our hero has a cast-iron jaw! Hubby may want to re-arrange it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Stellar work. You're a real craftsman at writing erotica. I'm definitely looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Smoking hot

Thanks for a great piece of fiction.

maninconnmaninconnabout 11 years ago
Good read!

Thanks for writing it! Looking forward to hearing about Karin's future accessories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More please...

I really enjoyed reading this. I hope there is a second chapter or more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
More PLEASE

This was 5* - the next one will be better!!

MerlynemrysMerlynemrysalmost 11 years ago
Great development

OK! I'm hooked. When do we get the next chapter? Let me know when you post it so I don't miss it.

MarieProvostMarieProvostover 10 years ago
What a trip!

It was like an erotic Seinfeld episode. Funny and sexy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
ONE VERY SPECIAL WRITER

This played out very well!

These descriptions you have used added depth to the story and characters. The shopping facility and sales rack became real and not simply inserted words for scene location. All around, your descriptive manner has added to the telling of a very good first chapter in the Loving Wife category. I look forward to more.

Don't begin rushing to write. An audience will wait if the characters and quality of writing are as well defined as you have thus far displayed.

BTW; Love the hair on her vagina and your leaving the girl friend an enigma to be discovered later.

a_older_genta_older_gentalmost 9 years ago
great story

I enjoyed your story and hope you add more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
THIS SHOULD BE CONTINUED

Loved it. Is there more?

Helen1899Helen1899over 1 year ago

Oh my god, i want part two now don't let me down.

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