by johnnieblue44
We need a part two. One of the best stories I've read in a LONG time.
Can't wait for the second installment....nice to see you back johnnieblue44
This affair is heading for a possible chunky husband . I can't see any good coming out of it
Why bother developing great hook-up lines when the company cutie wants to inhale your tube steak? I would not have bothered dreaming something like this as a kid because I instinctively knew it would never come close - some things you DON'T want to accurately predict, but I was good on THAT one!
Hope our hero has a cast-iron jaw! Hubby may want to re-arrange it!
Stellar work. You're a real craftsman at writing erotica. I'm definitely looking forward to future chapters.
Thanks for writing it! Looking forward to hearing about Karin's future accessories.
I really enjoyed reading this. I hope there is a second chapter or more to come.
OK! I'm hooked. When do we get the next chapter? Let me know when you post it so I don't miss it.
This played out very well!
These descriptions you have used added depth to the story and characters. The shopping facility and sales rack became real and not simply inserted words for scene location. All around, your descriptive manner has added to the telling of a very good first chapter in the Loving Wife category. I look forward to more.
Don't begin rushing to write. An audience will wait if the characters and quality of writing are as well defined as you have thus far displayed.
BTW; Love the hair on her vagina and your leaving the girl friend an enigma to be discovered later.