by haleyandjames
I'm surprised there is no additional detail about what happened when the guy's eyes were "literally glued to her chest". I liked the scenario and I like when anyone makes the effort to write but this story needs a lot of editorial input.
In response to your comment, his eyes were glued to my chest, nothing fuether happened. We are here to write about the real experiences we have had and therefore will not be making anything up to please other people.
my daughter actually does this and while it may be wrong I love seeing her flash her beautiful nipples
The "Glue Removal" commenter meant that the words "literally glued to her chest" means they were *literally glued to her chest*. He's nitpicking about the incorrect use of the word "literally" in that sentence, which is to say, "literally NOT literally".
But that guy's fastidiousness aside, this was an exciting story and I love the realism of reading both sides. I will now be checking for more from you guys. Keep on posting! xx
Dude, where are the pictures?! ;) It would definitely help with the mental picture of Haley in my head.
I like the different perspectives, but the writing style could be improved.
I liked it. Sounds like a true story, not some made up over done "true story". Keep on posting ;-)
Would much rather read a believable, true experience with a few errors, than a well written pile of crap any day. Keep it up!
That was awesome. Real people telling their real experiences. There is nothing better than a true story. Please keep submitting your exciting adventures.
Story was ok, but short. With it as short as it is should have been easy to proof read..
I am an old guy with a fetish I've had since I was a schoolboy....showing off my cock in public. I am currently a resident in an Assisted Living Facility and I frequently "forget" to zip-up and walk around with my dick hanging out. I sometimes get a semi-erection when I get a shocked response. A Nurse will usually zip me up, thinking I am just senile, and sometimes they cop a feel before putting it away.