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Anonymousover 18 years agoHow many roommates does this guy have???
You need to keep your characters straight. First you call Vic's roommate Marie and then Melissa. Which is it?
Anonymousover 18 years agoyou need to make the segue more clear
this is not clear enough, and the various 2ndary charactors make it more confusing.
Anonymousover 5 years agolet those two
asshole editors go away... the story was good ...5 star... I read your story for enjoyment not to pick it apart... keep writing !!!
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