All Comments on 'Accountant Ch. 02'

but there is far too much detailed description of everyday movements. Far too many references to the detail of making coffee for example. It's unneccessary, doesn't add to the story. Sometimes less is more. Keep writing. But consider signing up for a creative writing class. It could help you become a really good writer.

I love the pace and all the mundane everyday happenings it makes it more real. Keep up the great work.