by Beatnic_jazzman
A really interesting story on several levels. At times I think there is too much sex, but it does add to the character development. It will be quite a shock if Sam is involved in her husbands death, but you are certainly dangling some bait on that scenario, which means probably not.
It’s hard to be interested in a character’s characters & stories within a story. Getting tired of the guy stringing his girlfriend along & promising her weekends away while he’s in a secret relationship with her daughter.